Quote Originally Posted by Peelee View Post
That wasn't a wall of text at all, but if you're concerned about being overly verbose, you could have shortened that to "the terms of affection that Amity and Luz sometimes use for each other refer to food that Amity can't eat."
The second-guessing of what I did and did not need to include was contributing to the wallness of the text in earlier attempts to answer the question.