I think it reads pretty well, but just want to clarify one point:
Quote Originally Posted by Xihirli View Post
Dark Necrofear - Ghost: You are the Queen of the Netherworld, and the mother of the Cursed Twin Dolls. Death cannot keep you from serving Zorc. Change of Heart: When you are destroyed: Target 1 Player. In the Endphase, take control of that target (they become a Villain).
This only happens once, correct? It isn't a power that keeps on selecting someone else to become a villain, because that would be too OP.