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[Kyeudo]

Day 511: Faceless Prince Mrk. 2

Alright, here's the redesign as a lean, efficient and dexterous assassin-bot. Red is cable hair blue is lightning joints. Is this better?

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Time: 20 mins
Music: Orchid

Very much so. Some things I'd like to see:

Split the torso so that its just the chest and the pelvis, connected by lightning. I don't really like the spinal collum there.

With the hair, I was thinking something more like the predetor's dreadlocks:

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I'd like to see them going down his back in one narrow shock of cables, like a ponytail.

As for the pose, I'd like to see the left arm in the middle of swinging an electric whip, being brought down on a target in the direction of the viewer, with the right arm swing back, trailing a whip that's already snapping out in front of him.